Deep in the abyss of darkness lies the ashen remains of an
evil that once struck fear into the bravest of men; and caused suffering to
whomever lay in its path. An evil that bore fear unto death itself. As death
creeps upon its prey, slowly decaying a life until it ceases to exist. With the
sands of time counting down until the end, the lugubrious cycle of life. But
without adventure life becomes insipid. But with all adventure comes risk. What
greater adventure then ascending to the top of the world?
Six friends had travelled to Nepal for the journey of a
lifetime. To reach the top of the world with such intrepid mannerism; they had
begun their ascent unto the heavens. This kind of friendship they shared was
the friendship of a lifetime. They had all known each other since they were
just kids. Now as vibrant young adults they shared a bond that has survived
through thick and thin. As the group reached the base camp they were excited.
They sat around a fire and talked with anticipation. They could not wait to
begin the ascent.
The next day they were all well rested. Brandon was the
first to be ready; everyone knew he did it to make up for him being the
youngest. Britney helped pack up the rest of the supplies and they were off to
new heights. James noticed a part in the rocks and snow that made somewhat of a
path and they head up it. As they made haste up the mountain it began to grow
dark. Stacey stepped off the path and hit a chunk of ice. It collapsed and she
jumped back on the path. The group notices a large crevice had been exposed.
They walk over towards the edge and look down. They could not see the bottom of
it. “How far do ya’ think it goes?” Josh asked. Everyone looked down, even
though the sunlight was shining into the crevice from its position at sunset.
Strangely enough the sunlight did not illuminate the bottom of the crevice. The
group looks down again and feels a spine tingling chill throughout their
bodies. They moved away from the crevice.
After hours of hiking the group had only made it so far up
the mountain. The snow and winds greatly reduced the distance they were able to
cover. Had it not been for the groups determination they would have given up
their daring journey right then and there. The group found sturdy ground, with
a magnificent view of the rest of the Himalayas; patches of green towards parts
of the bottom, with snowcapped mountains that reached high up past the clouds.
Without the lights of the city, and the high altitude, the stars had started
becoming visible on the opposite side of the sky as the sunset. This beautiful
sight amazed the group and petrified them as they were struck with awe. After
the group had finished admiring the world around them they began to set up
their camp. For even the sight of beauty wasn’t enough to mask the harsh
mountain climate.
The next day the group had climbed for around three hours
when they noticed something strange. They looked over and saw what appeared to
be a man, wearing only a black cloak that moved across the snow as if he wasn’t
even on the ground. As the being moved away from the group they lost sight of it
in the fog, but not before a gust of wind blew by; the air was thick and heavy,
unusual for the high altitude.
Sleep had been hard for the group; each member was too
scared to sleep. The group was finally able to move on the next day, however
everyone was extremely tired. They had made fine progress the previous day, but
even so, must continue to head up the mountain as fast as they can; for the
journey is treacherous and the rations can wither away fast. But with this
danger comes an exciting thrill that slows the world around. Time is as if a
rushing waterfall that feeds into a lake freezing over; it has become stagnant.
As the group continues they are halted by an unearthly shadow passing over
them. They look to find the source, but nothing is found. Then they feel a cold
passing through them, though the air was stagnant. “What had happened?” Britney
asked. “I don’t know.” Josh replied.
The group just wanted to finish their journey; to be rid of
the things that bring them such fear. They continued to climb, until they saw a
small ravine in the ground. They look down; they see the being they saw
earlier. What they had noticed is that the cloak was not made out of any solid
material; it was a black fog that enclosed around the beings body! Seeing this
disturbed them, and they quickly moved on. They go around a part of the
mountain blocking their path, it sort of was like a boulder, but also as if a
separate mountain on its own; it blocked the path going up, so they had to
detour around. When the group made it around they noticed the being walking
towards them, they stopped and stumbled, two of them fell. They were paralyzed
with fear. The being grabbed James before he got up. Josh got up and ran; the
group followed with him.
When they found another back road to climb the mountain they
directed up it. The group set up their camp, hoping that the being would not
find them. When they woke up the next day they smelt something awful. But what
was it? They get out of their tents and see James’s body naked; lying in the
ground with his arms to his sides. The blood had been removed from his body and
formed a hollow ring around him. It was a perfect circle and none of it touched
his body; they looked closer and see his eyes have been gouged out. They began
to freak out. They packed up camp in a hurry forgetting one of their tents.
They climbed, higher, the higher they climbed they began to
question the being. “What if it’s the spirit of someone who died climbing up to
the top and he must follow us to the top to be set free?” Britney said. She had
been one to research a lot of ghost stories often. “That’s absurd!” Brandon
said. Josh replied: “What if it is really a spirit or something?” and then
Bruce replied “Then we find a way to kill it.” But the group knew deep inside
them that evil cannot be killed; only suppressed and locked away.
They climb higher, towards the end of the day; they have
ascended to a point where the top is visible. They decide to push on through
the night. Nothing seemed to be happening, and this is what worried them. They
make it to the top where they feel protected. They rest there and the next day
they begin the decent back down.
As they descended faster than they climbed up; they had
already made pleasing progress. They had begun to set up their camp when a
chill ran down their bodies, almost as if ice being rubbed down their spines. They
looked around seeing nothing… just the desolate freezing terrain they were
surrounded by. The next day they continued their journey; the decent back home.
The group had made a significant amount of progress on their decent; they went
to sleep without seeing anything out of the ordinary. They woke up the next
day, or at least most of them woke up the next day. They saw Bruce and Stacey
frozen together hugging outside, their bodies’ upright and pale, covered in a
thin layer of ice giving their bodies a reflective shine without disturbing the
ability to see their faces. They were looking into each other’s eyes, whilst a
formed gasping expression was noticeable. Their bodies’ seemed thinner; then
the group looked down. A ring of blood was perfectly formed around their
bodies.
The group began to run, but the snow made this difficult,
they hit a patch of ice and go sliding down the mountain side. They grab their
ice picks and use it to get a grip and stop sliding; they look up and see the
being standing over them; as the being stood over them the black smoke was
blowing to the side looking as if it waves flowing out from around the beings
body. The being had a necklace around his thin pale lifeless body; connected to
the necklace was a dangling heart blacker then the night itself. The heart was
still beating, though connected to nothing but the necklace. The way the skin
wrapped around his body, as if leather wrapped tightly around a chair, made a
majority of the beings skeleton visible; except for the part over its stomach
which seemed to have no muscle under it and no belly button on the center of
it. The being reached through Josh’s chest and pulled out his heart; he stood
there for a few seconds looking at what had happened, there was no puncture
wound. He collapsed and his body begun to slide down the ice and the blood
began to flow out of his eyes. It then blew away in the air, the same way the
black smoke blew from the beings body, a crimson stream flowing through the
air.
Brandon and Britney were all that was left; the being moved
away as they released their ice picks and continued to slide; they later got to
a point where they could get off the ice and continue their journey back on the
snow; they begin to get off but Brandon falls into a hole in the ice that is
made when he pulls his ice pick out. He falls into the ground, and lands on his
icepick. At that moment Britney could see the being down in the hole looking
down at his body. Britney began to run down, tripping every few steps; she
slowed to a walk when she realized she’d travel faster if she didn’t trip. But
even still she was worried, when she realized that she was near the crevice
that Stacey accidentally opened, she knew this was how that being had been
released. She yelled for the being, nothing happened. She waited and waited;
yet still nothing happened. She set up her camp and slept in her tent. She woke
up every few hours out of fear; and then at around midnight it happened. She
opened her eyes and the being was right over her, its face was extremely close
to hers, it screamed despite the fact it did not have a mouth; and she grabbed
the heart necklace, the being pulled back at her. She grabbed the ice pick and
the being pulled her towards the crevice. She takes the ice pick and swings it
at the beings head and it doesn’t do anything, she pulls it out and there’s no
wound. She realizes the black heart started beating faster, she rips off the
necklace and the being is hurt. The being is crawling towards her as she is
about to swing down on the heart with her ice pick. The being jumps on her just
as she hits it and they both fall deep into the crevice. As they reach the
bottom both their bodies are rendered lifeless and the being has been
vanquished. The smoke ceases to flow from the beings body. But at that moment
the heart laying knocked away from either of their bodies begins to beat.
By: Kylan Walker
Muy bueno Kylan
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