Sunday, February 24, 2013

The Thing That Eats


It began in July of 1968; on a warm summer evening in rural Texas.  Mrs. Macready was sweeping the dust out of her house when she heard a scream. She runs over to find her daughter Betsy crying over her dead dog. Mrs. Macready said: “It was probably coyotes.” Betsy asked: “Why did it have to happen to spot? He was a good dog.” Mrs. Macready responded: “Sometimes bad things happen to good people, or animals.” She then asked Betsy to come inside and wash up for dinner.

The next day Mrs. Macready went into town. She met up with Mr. Jenkins the town’s prosperous farmer. She asked him if he’d been having trouble with coyotes recently. He responded with: “No ma’am I think this is something much larger then coyotes, some of my cattle has been killed off.” She said “Well what could it be?” Mr. Jenkins said “I don’t know, but whatever it is, it’s big. I’m going to be waiting in my field with a shotgun in case it shows up.” Mrs. Macready bought her groceries and headed back home. She got Betsy ready for bed and tried to dial out the telephone to reach her husband. The town’s phone lines were never very reliable when making out of town calls.

Mrs. Macready turns on the radio to listen to music. The announcer says “…And that was ‘tip toe thru’ the tulips with me’ by Tiny Tim at number seventeen on the popularity charts as of June 29th. Now for a quick update on the weather. For the next few nights there will be a few meteor showers visible over some parts of Texas for the next few nights and the next few days are looking very clear. Now here’s ‘2,000 Light Years From Home’ by The Rolling Stones.” Mrs. Macready checks out the window, sure enough she could see those beautiful streaks of light in the sky. She goes to her room, sets out her clothes for the next day and goes to bed.

Mrs. Macready heads into town with Betsy, she looks for Mr. Jenkins who’s always there on Friday. And more importantly it was the first Friday of the month; he always delivered some form of food to the town market on the first Friday of every month. Mrs. Macready went over to the town’s grocer, Mark Gutenberg an immigrant from Germany during the Second World War. He moved here when he was young but despite that he still talked with a slight accent. He told Mrs. Macready that Mr. Jenkins had not shown up today. After a few hours of waiting Betsy was getting restless, she went off to play in the forest. Mrs. Macready thought it was okay because the creature seemed to only come out at night. She goes in the forest; after about half an hour she runs out screaming. Some of the town’s folk come running. Betsy points at the forest and then starts crying. Some of the men grab their rifles out of their trucks and head into the forest. There’s a dead cow, and bloody shoeprints heading off into the forest. The men follow them; they see old Mr. Jenkins Lake. It was completely empty. They notice that the blood tracks turn off around the lake and back into another part of the forest. The men follow them a ways until they find a pool of blood. One of the men notices a drip, and looks up. He looks frightened and stares, the other men look up and see Mr. Jenkins body mostly ripped up and hanging on a tree branch.

The men head back to town and get a bag to bring back the body, they tell the news to Mrs. Macready. She was a good friend of Mr. Jenkins and she was stunned with disbelief; but when they brought back the body she started crying. The men decided to call a town meeting at the rec center. One of them said “we need to find this creature and kill it.” A few others agreed, while yet a few others were afraid to find out what it was. The town members eventually decided to go after the creature; and a group of men began gathering weapons and flash lights. The men split up into groups of four and go out in the forest. Some bring their dogs and have them sniff the cow hoping they’ll track the creature down. The dogs pick up a scent and begin to run away in cowardice. The men don’t bother chasing the dogs; they’re just determined to kill this creature. One group heads off in the opposite direction the dogs had run. They travel a while and then stop. They hear a noise that sounds like something eating. They see a creature with bluish-green reptilian skin with patches of bonier looking skin bumps around the joints on the limbs. The creature had dark black eyes and a row of two inch spikes going along its spine. When the creature sees the people it raises its spikes the way a cat hunches its back before it pounces on a mouse. The creature takes a tremendous leap towards the people, slashes the throat of one of the men and bites the throat of another. One of them hides behind a tree as the creature pounces on the third guy and starts eating out of his stomach as he’s screaming for help. After the creature catches a scent of the other group it heads runs over there. The guy waits until he can’t hear the creature anymore and leaves. He runs towards the town, he hears screaming behind him. “There was nothing he could do” he told himself. He ran to the town and told the people what happened.

The men go after the creature with their hunting rifles. By this time it was almost daylight, the find the mangled bodies of their friends that went out before them. They follow the path the creature left in blood, and find it resting on a rock. One of the men takes a shot at it; the bullet shatters. The men look worried and run. The creature chases after them; two of the men make it to town just as the creature catches up to them and notices all the other people around. The creature begins massacring the townspeople. Mrs. Macready takes Betsy and hides in Mr. Jenkins storm cellar. She goes up into his house and locks the doors, she looks out the window. She looks at the tree line and notices a shadow moving over them. She thought it was strange because there were no clouds. She looks up and sees a giant metal saucer flying over the trees. It was heading for Mr. Jenkins’ lake. She notices the creature run toward it. She unlocks the front door and heads towards the ship leaving Betsy in the house. The ship lands at the dried up lake bed; and she sees the creature walk into an open ramp on the ship. She sees a group of black creatures that look like men stowing the creature away in a cage. After the ship flies off Mrs. Macready had no idea what to make of the events that happened that day. Six months later Mrs. Macready was institutionalized for delusions of an alien attack.

By: Kylan Walker

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